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The Encounter Ch.1 by ~cutiecat01153:iconcutiecat01153:



                  The Encounter Ch.1 Pt.1    We Meet Again.

     Now I know a lot of you readers like stories with lots of blood and violence but  I am sorry this is not one of the stories. Now this story is about how I want my life to go, and this is from my heart, so if any of you dont like sad love stories then find something else to read. Now if you do read this and do not like it please do not flame me I have only been writing for one and a half years. Now please enjoy the story and I hope you like it, thankyou.

sentences =these mean that they are the characters thoughts not the character speaking.
sentences =these mean that the character is yelling or screaming in pain or anger. _________________________________________________________________
      It was a warm sunny day out and everyone was happily enjoying themselves with the one they loved. Well not everyone.Their was a young girl around the age of 17 walking threw the park alone. Now this girl lived in Tennessee, but was vistiting some of her friends in Florida. The girls name was Lauryn Spicer, and she had once lived in Florida before moving to Tennessee when she was 14.
     Now Lauryn was just walking through a park close to her old home. But she wasnt their too run and play, being 17 and all, no, she was their hoping to clear her mind that had been clouded for quite a while now. While she was walking she saw a boy around her age that looked extremely familiar to her, playing basket ball.
" No. It couldnt be him. I havent seen him in almost four years. " Lauryn thought, as she watched the boy play basketball with his friends. She turned and was about to walk away when the basketball the boys had been using hit her in the back of the head.
"Oww! Watch where your throwing that thing!" she yelled she threw the basketball and hit one of the lauphing boys right in the face.
"Come on guys. She's got a point. Now stop lauphing." said the boy she had been watching.
"Listen. I'm realy sorry about that. Are you okay?" he asked as he walked up her.
"Its okay. I've had worst. By the way my names Lauryn Spicer. Whats your name?" she asked, holding out her hand.
"Christian Davilia. Nice to meet you Lauryn." he responded, shaking her hand warmly.
"You know funny thing, you have the same first and last name as one of my bestfriends from middle school. But I havent seen her since seventh grade." Christian said chuckling to himself.
"Go figure. So do you." she said, as they started to walk away from the basketball court.
     "Sorry if I'm being nosy. But did you go to Martinez Middle School at any point in time?" Christian asked slowly, hoping not to anger the girl.
''Why yes I did. And my friend with your name went there. I remember how on the last day of school he gave me this adorable green teddy-bear in a sailor suit. But sadly i lost it after I moved up to Tennessee.'' Lauryn said sadly, remembering theat she was in love with said boy.
''Wait!? Teddy-Bear!? Tennessee!? Lauryn is this realy you? Its me Christian.''the boy yelled, making the girl jump in surprise.
''Christian! OMG! I cant believe its you!'' Lauryn screamed as she jumped forward to hug her friend, only to let go blushing while turning away.
''Umm. I'm sorry. I guess I over reacted.'' she said starting to walk away with a heavy heart.
''Wait. Where are you going?'' Christian asked, saddness showing on his face.
''I have to get back to my sisters to get my car. I promised a friend that I would visit her while I was down here.'' She said, turning somewhat to look at him.
''Well...um...may I walk with you? I'd realy like to know how you have been since you left Florida.'' he asked, his cheeks turning a light shade of pink.
''Sure. I'd like that Christian. I'd also like to know how you and the others have been doing since I left.'' Lauryn answered, smiling at the thought of walking alone with him.
''Well. Lead the way madam. For I do not know the way to your sisters.'' Christain said, imitating a prince like gesture. Lauryn giggled and began walking to her sisters.

Part 2    The Tale.

     As the two friends walked they were both chatting happily about what had happened in the three years that they had not seen eachother. Both were extreamely happy to be with the one that they had missed the most in the last three years.
''So you see, after you left and I started 8th grade it was like you had never been there. Heather Williams and I were the only people that still talked about you like you were a friend.'' Christian said looking down with a hint of anger and saddness showing on his face.
''Wait? What do mean by 'as a friend' ? What did people say about me after I left?'' Lauryn asked, trying to get Christian to look up at her.
''Well alot of the boys that had thought of you as a lesbian because you had cut your hair, went around spreading fake rumours about you.'' he said bitterly, looking away from her.
''What kind of rumours? Wait dont tell me. I dont want to get in a bad mood.'' she said holding up her hands in a no gesture, chuckling.
     ''I wonder how she would react if I tried to hold her hand?'' Christian thought as they crossed a road, already closs to there destination. He decided not too.
''So. How has it been in Tennessee for you?'' he asked, trying to break the erie silence that had fallen.
''It's been good. My first year there was a lot of fun though. Up there no one is ever bullied by another student. I have all kinds of great friends. But while I was up there, there was this one thing that I missed from Florida and could not forget. And this one thing was what kept me from moving on.'' she said, though this thing was actually a someone, and they happened to be walking right beside her.
''And what was this one thing you couldnt forget?'' Christian asked, slightly afraid of the answer.
''Well actually Christian. That something was actually a 'someone'. And well the person,''
     Christian waited, afraid of the answer. ''Was you Christian.'' she finished, looking up at him smiling.
''M-Me?'' Christian stuttered, not believing his ears. Even though his mind was telling him to be happy, his heart was saying otherwise. For some reason he felt guilty that he had stopped her from moving on and getting a boyfriend.
''Boyfriend.'' he muttered sadly. Knowing thateven if they did get together, it would never last, she lived in Tennessee and his parents said they were moving. But to where he did not know.
''Huh? What did you say?'' Lauryn asked, having heard his mutter, but being unable to understand it.
''Huh? Oh nothing. Jist getting to talk to you while I can.'' he answered gloomily, looking down to watch his feet as they walked.
''What do you mean? Are you moving out of Florida?'' Lauryn asked, a hint of saddness in her voice.
''Yeah. And the worst part is that I dont know what the state is. All I kmow is that the town is called Larwenceburg and the high school I'll be going to is called Summertown High.'' he said, saddness clearly noticeable in his voice.
     At hearing the name of the town and the school, Lauryn started to giggle until she was laughing.
''What are ou laughing about? Because of this we might never see eachother agian.'' Christian damanded, looking up with a angered expression.
''Did this town happen to be close to somewhere called Nashville?'' Lauryn asked, having to hold in her laughter to speak.
''Yeah it is close to place called Nashville. But how did you know that?'' Christian asked, confused as to how Lauryn knew this.
''Well you see Nashville is the capital of Tennessee, and Larwenceburg is he name of the town I live in. Oh yeah and Summertown High just so happens to be the highschool I go to up there.'' she answered, still giggeling a little.
''Wait. You mean that I am moving into the state and town that you live in?'' Christian asked slowly, to make sure he heard right.
''Yep. Thats right. Which means that by a small chance we could be neighbors and or classmates.'' she exclaimes happily, running off while laughing happily.
''Hey! Wait for me Lauryn!'' Christian yelled as he started running after her.
''Man. She's gotten alot faster!'' he thought as he caught up to her, breathing hard.
     All of a sudden Christians foot got caught by a rock and he lost his balance, bring Lauryn down with him.
''Oh no! I cant let Lauryn get hurt!'' he screamed, not know that he had said it out loud. And with that said Christian grabbed Lauryn and turned his body so that Lauryn would not get hurt, but that he would take the full impact of the ground, which sadly was covered with rocks and acorns.
''Ahhhh!'' he screamed, as they hit the ground and scidded across the cement. Before Christian could react though, his head was thrown pianfully hard against the ground causing him to go uncounsios.
''Thaks for protecting me like that Christian. But you didnt...'' Lauryn spoke, trying to get up, but stopped when she noticed that he was not responding.
''Hey Christian, wake up. Christian? Christian! Christian!?'' she screamed, trying to wake him up. Lauryn decided that she should check his breathing and heart.
     She found that his heart rate was fine but that his breathing was to weak, which made her worry. Thats when she noticed that they were in front of her sisters house. Sadly though her sister wasn't home, but at work. When she struggled to pick him up, she felt a small tricle of something warm and wet touching her fingers where Christians head was. She pulled her out from under his head and saw a small amount of blood on her hand.
''Oh no. Christian why?'' she whispered sadly, wondereing why he would protect her from this kind of damage.
''Lauryn listen. I know you said to wait but... what happen!?'' a voice screamed behind her. Lauryn turned to find her friend Karla standing a few feet away.
''Karla! Quik help me! He's bleeding! I'll explain once we're inside!'' Lauryn screamed, still struggling to carry the uncounsios boy.
''Umm...Right. Coming!'' Karla said, as she ran forward to help drag/pull the boy up her friends driveway. After they had gotten Christian inside, Lauryn everything that happen while cleaning and applying medicine to all of  Christians wounds. After she had done that, she bandaged up what wounds were on his back, then wrapped his head in medical wrap to stop the bleeding.
''And thats what happen.'' Lauryn said as she dropped herself in a dinning room chair, exhousted, Christian sleepng soundly on the living room couch.

Part  3     The Nightmare.

     It was a long dark hallway that seamed to go on forever. Also their was door after door on both sides fo the hall, each door with a number on it.
''Where am I? What is this place?'' a boy asked no one, standing at the begining of the hall.
''Christian?'' a voice asked from down the hall.
''Who's htere? Who are you?'' the boy known as Christian asked, taking a step forward.
''Christian? Is that really you?'' the voice asked agian. It was at having heard the voice a second time that Christian was able to identifie it.
''Lauryn? Lauryn where are you!?'' he screamed, running up to the first door.
     He was about to grab the door knob when he heard his worst fear come true. His best friend and crush Lauryn give off a blood curdeling scream.
''Christian! Help me!'' she sreamed, fear and pain in her voice.
''Lauryn! Hold on! I'm comming!'' he yelled, as he tour down the hallway, until he reached a door that was open about an inch.
''Help me!'' Lauryn screamed, the sound coming from behind the door.
''Lauryn!?'' Christian yelled, as he pushed open the door to a blinding light.
     Once the light had dimmed and Christian could see agian, he found that he was back at the park.
''How'd I get back here?'' Christian whispered, confused. When all at once a sream went through his ears.
''Christian! Help me! Ahhhh!'' Lauryn screamed, her scream coming from the reck center. Christian was instantly runnung as fast as his legs would carry himtoward the building, but halfway their he was all of a suddenlybeing stot at by paintball and beeby guns. But thus didn't stop him. Putting in a extra burst of speed he reached the building doors beathing hard and his legs and arms burning and stinging like they were on fire.
''No. I cant rest now. Lauryn needs me.'' he thought still breathing hard. Standing up straight, he kicked the doors open screaming
''Lauryn! Where are you!''
''Christian! Over here!'' she csreamed in responce.
Christian ran to the doors from which Lauryns voice had come from, and shoved them open.
     Once open, Christian came apon a horrible sight. Lauryn was lieing on the floor infront of him badly beat and cut up on her arms and legs.
''Christian. You came.'' she said weakly.
''Lauryn? Who did this to you?'' he asked, walking up and sitting down next to her.
''I dont know. He wore a mask and ran out when you entered the building.'' she answered, looking away.
''Yeah and now I get to kill you both!'' a voice said as a man in all black walked in behind Christian.
''But first. The girl.'' he said, lifting up a hand gun.
''Nooo!'' Christian yelled, as he jumped up at the guy.
But he was to slow, for before he could reach the man, he pulled the trigger to the gun and shot Lauryn.
''NOOOOOO!!!'' Christian screamed, before falling to his knees.

                             END OF CHAPTER 1    CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON
©2008-2009 ~cutiecat01153
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This story is not of any show or cartoon, but of my own creation. Do not place this link on any site without my consent. This story will consist of real people who realy excist. Do not burn me or the story if you do not like it.
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....nice story Spider. Hopefully u came to see me when you visited Florida friends

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I'm a Avatar ninja master with some dangerous moves!!-falls over tree root-..........Dang it........

(>'_';)># I had this waffle for you
#<('_'<;) But I was like
(>'#'<;) "I'm hungry"
(>'-'<;) So I ate it. . . .
(>^-^<;) And it was yummy!!
:iconcutiecat01153:
i will and do and you r in the story

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Things about me.
1.I love NaruHina
2.I write not draw
3.I'm a vampire/ninja
4.I love all anime
5.And I love to anoy people
LET ALL THOSE WHO HATE ANIME DIE A PIANFUL DEATH!!!MAHAHAHAHA!!!
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good

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I'm a Avatar ninja master with some dangerous moves!!-falls over tree root-..........Dang it........

(>'_';)># I had this waffle for you
#<('_'<;) But I was like
(>'#'<;) "I'm hungry"
(>'-'<;) So I ate it. . . .
(>^-^<;) And it was yummy!!
:iconcutiecat01153:
thankyou :hug:s

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Things about me.
1.I love NaruHina
2.I write not draw
3.I'm a vampire/ninja
4.I love all anime
5.And I love to anoy people
LET ALL THOSE WHO HATE ANIME DIE A PIANFUL DEATH!!!MAHAHAHAHA!!!
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I'M IN TEH STORY, RIGHT?! RIGHT?¡!¡¡!¡
jk. on the wii readin ur story.
preety good so far just use spaces on some parts of the story. :D

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"WHY DID YOU STOP AT A RED LIGHT AND LET ME HIT YOU DOING 80?" - Dane Cook

"Yeah.. we should have a scary tunnel. Not a happy tunnel... a scary tunnel." - Willy Wonka from a Willy Wonka parody.
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aww I really liked it :D
and yes, u can put me in the story ^-^
cuz I'm just so special ;P

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nyappy! :3
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thaks and any ideas you want to give me will give you credit to the making of chapter 2 and on =^_^=

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Things about me.
1.I love NaruHina
2.I write not draw
3.I'm a vampire/ninja
4.I love all anime
5.And I love to anoy people
LET ALL THOSE WHO HATE ANIME DIE A PIANFUL DEATH!!!MAHAHAHAHA!!!

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